DI-C-HRII/HRIV/MRI/ITS-6-DOC-SET-V2.0 ===================================== o The archive plan (DMAP) needs updating to include information about archiving the lightcurves, once negotiations have been completed. o If possible, please generate an overall acronym list for the documentation set. o Please add a document with a high-level overview and summary of the mechanics of the exoplanet science observations (the executions of the integrations, e.g.). o One reviewer couldn't find a plate scale in any of the catalog files and documents he read looking for it. (It is in the instrument .cat file in microradians, but that is not the usual unit astronomers expect.) If it is possible to post this information somewhere a little more prominently, please do so. o B. Carcich submitted a list of typos found in the SIS (appended). o catalog/epoxi.cat - In the "EPOCh" section where the table of observating dates and targets are specified, change the third entry from "TRES-3 2008-03-06/066 2008-03-06/066" to "TRES-3 2008-03-06/066 2008-03-08/068". o di-c-hrii_hriv_mri_its-6-doc-set-v2.0/ref_di.cat There's some overlap with ref_epoxi.cat - maybe you want to clean those up. Probably not. ---------- Forwarded message ---------- Date: Thu, 23 Jul 2009 16:42:32 -0400 (EDT) From: Achromatic Crab Shin To: Stephanie McLaughlin , raugh@astro.umd.edu Subject: Liens I find as I follow the review III SIS, p 11: usual orientation with the solar pointing toward SIS, p 12: show the number of bad pixels => show the fraction of ... SIS, p 12: HRIV focus para. occurs twice. SIS, p 17: CCD; It => CCD; it SIS, p 19, Table 2: are the units of minimum commanded exp correct? SIS, p 25: HAT-P 7 => HAT-P-7 SIS, p 28: products such instrument => ... such as ... SIS, p 31: The data for this pixel => The datum for this pixel SIS, p 31: Acronym ADC used before its definition on p 90. Add to 7.2? RDR data sets, /calib/xtalk/*.lbl: XSjOVERI => XSjOVERi RDR data sets, calinfo.txt: for the correcting for => ... correction ... - alternate: for the correcting of RDR data sets, calinfo.txt: set flagged as => flagged as to be continued ... SIS, p 31, 4.1.4, last sentence: reference to section 3.2.1 mistaken? - same for following sections SIS, p 31, 4.1.4: describes the pipeline generates => describes how[?] ... SIS, p 32, 4.1.5 & 4.1.6: because of => because SIS, p 32, 4.1.7.1, ADCLUT: for the correcting for => ... correction ... - alternate: for the correcting of SIS, p 33, DRKMODEL: master dark frames for each instrument mode => a master dark frame for ... OR ... frames for all instrument modes - same for FLAT section SIS, p 33, FLAT: from the linearity of [doesn't make sense to me] => after[?] the linearity correction was applied to SIS, p 33, XTALK: crosstalk is across IR quadrants is => drop first "is" SIS, p 33, XTALK: are set to zero the automated => ... zero to keep the ... SIS, p 34 ff, 4.1.7.2: some of the previous items from 4.1.7.1 repeat SIS, p 34: imbedded => embedded SIS, p 34, FILTERS: table each filter => table for each filter SIS, p 34, FLAT: contains flat fields for every combination instrument => contains a flat field for every combination of instrument SIS, p 35: generated a => generated by a SIS, p 35: number of anomalous => fraction of ... SIS, p 36: HRIV MRI => HRIV and MRI SIS, p 36: RADREVRAD => RADREV SIS, p 37: Figure 0. 0? SIS, p 37: Standard Steps Standard Steps. Is that in the original? SIS, p 46, 4.2.4: 0 to 24 => 0 to 23 SIS, p 47, 4.3.4: the target-to-sun values that were calculated for the time when the light left the sun => ... when the light arrived at the target - not sure this is needed; may be defined in PDSDD SIS, p 47, 4.3.5: "scientific" => "spacecraft" SIS, p 47, 4.3.5: [Sun is almost always toward the bottom; North is arbitrary and typically depends on approach vs lookback] SIS, p 47, last sentence: The direction ... is => The directions ... are SIS, p 73, 4.5: when the light left the sun => ... light arrives at the target - not sure this is needed; see p 47, 4.3.4 above. SIS, p 77, MID_JULIAN_DATE_VALUE: IMAGE_MID_TIME => EPOXI:IMAGE_MID_TIME SIS, p 77, SPACECRAFT_CLOCK_*_COUNT: 1/125th => 1/256th SIS, p 77, EPOXI:EARTH_OBSERVER_MID_TIME: from the spacecraft to earth => from the target to earth SIS, p 79, EPOXI:OBSERVATION_ID: images number 2 => image number 2 SIS, p 84, EPOXI:ECLIPTIC_NORTH_CLOCK_ANGLE: EME J2000 => Ecliptic J2000 - not sure "in the ... J2000 reference frame" is correct here and in the other _ANGLE keywords, these are actually angles in the FOV frame. SIS, p 84, SOLAR_ELONGATION: between the target, the Sun, and the observer => ... the target, the observer and the Sun. - OR the angle between the target and the Sun as viewed by the observer OR the angle, with the observer as its apex, between the target and the Sun - N.B. It may be the angle between the instrument boresight and the vector from the observer to the Sun. SIS, p 85, TARGET_*OCENTRIC_DISTANCE: [definitions are swapped] SIS, p 85 ff, *_VECTOR: coordinate frame => reference frame SIS, p 86: EARTH_TARET_VELOCITY_VECTOR => EARTH_TARGET_VELOCITY_VECTOR SIS, p 89, EPOXI:DATA_TO_DN_MULTIPLIER: to raw data numbers => to calibrated data numbers (decompressed, linearized, crosstalk-, bias- and dark-removed, flat-fielded if not HRII) SIS, p 89, EPOXI:DATA_TO_DN_MULTIPLIER: raw data counts => calibrated data numbers SIS, p 90, EPOXI:PARTIAL_SATURATED_PIXEL_COUNT: full-well => partial[-well] SIS, p 91, SAMPLE_BITS: [Source is duplicated] SIS, p 92, SAMPLE_TYPE: MSN_... => MSB_... SIS, p 93, EPOXI:DERIVED_*: the value. => this value. SIS, p 94, several: Crusie => Cruise SIS, p 94: Cruise\ => Cruise SIS, p 94, last three: are these -C- or calibration? SIS, p 98, 6.2.2: eight, nested => eight nested SIS, p 100: An example of a data product is => Examples ... are SIS, p 101: NASA Navigation => NASA National SIS, p 101: [If both RAD & RADREV are here, then IFREV should be too] - N.B. IF, IFREV, RAD & RADREV are abbriviations, not strictly acronyms SIS, p 101: [add ADC, EDR, RDR] Phew! -- Brian Carcich +01 607-255-7453(o) -277-0566(h) -342-7595(m) -255-9002(f)